sexta-feira, 16 de janeiro de 2009

factory

Some people support to build a factory near our community, other decided to oppose it. Nowadays some hold the opinion that a new factory here helps to improve living standard of people in our community and it will bring prosperity to our community, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I concerned, I agree that build a factory near our community is an excellent idea. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

One of the primary causes is that the factory will employ a lot of workers. As a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. Another advantage about the tax collected will also be increased. The town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development like the development of other business such as shops, theatres and restaurants. Furthermore, the products the factory manufactures will improve our quality of living.

But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. There are some disadvantages building a factory here. First, it will disturb the quiescence of our community. A lot of people will rush into our community due to the factory, and the road will get crowded, it will be very noisy and unsafe for our children who always play freely in the streets before. What is more, the factory will produce many waste products each day, and there will be much waste water coming out from the factory and it will pollute the our rivers, including poisonous gas and liquid harming the air too.

General speaking, set up a factory in our community is a great way of development, in spite of advantages and disadvantages. Recognizing the fact that modern technologies have made today’s factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum should drive us to conclude that is possible get progress without harming the environment like in old times.



Written by,


Alessandro Alves Damasceno

English Course’s academic

Federal University of Acre

Um comentário:

  1. point to correct:
    -my hold
    -avoid to use our community twice in the same paragraphy.
    -rewrite this sentence again: Another advantage about this the tax collected will also be increased.

    Thanks to finish parcialy your activity.

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